Jan 7, 2010

A date with a stranger.

How would you define a date? Would you define it 'a social or a romantic rendezvous between two mutually compatible persons'? Or would you call it 'a simple yet special meet which just happens by chance', leave aside the different parameters such as compatibility, understanding etc. A meet in which you do not wish to speak AT ALL but wish to listen to him/her for endless hours. A meet in which neither of the partners know each other. Something similar happened to me a couple of days ago that completely left me mesmerized. I enjoyed each and every part of it. I know, may be at the end of this narration (which I’ll begin in a few seconds from now) you might say “What a crazy lass she is!” But that’s a part of ‘me’ and there is no denying that I really am. So, before starting off, let me take you to the flashback and help you picturize how it all began…..


 I was at a bookstore looking for a book when my eyes fell on this guy, who was quietly seated in one corner. He’d a thin seamless layer of hair on his upper lip and some beneath his chin. His looks precisely helped me conclude that he was in his late teens. There was something strange about him. He looked as if he WANTED TO TALK. I was busy doing this reasoning stuff when a polite voice retracted me from it. “Yes Ma’am, did you find anything for yourself?” the shopkeeper inquired. I right away removed my eyes off that guy and answered the shopkeeper that I needed some more time (to look at what?). It took me a while to resume my work for which I was there, when I was again interrupted; it was him, though. “Would you like to join me for a cup of coffee?” He asked. At the first instance I could not believe he said that to me but this is what I was expecting of him, wasn’t I? To strike up a conversation; may be over a cup of coffee. “Well, I don’t know even know you. Um I mean…” “Don’t worry. It’s just a cup of coffee. Plus, I’m new to this city and have failed to get a good company so far. So I thought….” “Aaa..what time is it?” I asked. “Oh, it’s quarter to 4. I’m certain we wouldn’t take more than an hour or so, trust me.” I could not help but nod my head in consent or may be I did not want to refuse.


We went to a close-by coffee shop and in a few minutes made ourselves comfortable on our respective couches, placed right across each other. By the way, I forgot to tell you that prior to my visit to the bookstore I’d a terrible argument with my parents. And probably that was the reason I decided to go out for a stroll, in the middle of which I dropped in at that store too. So, you can well imagine I was quite low and so were my communicating skills.


 So coming back to the scene at the coffee shop. I tried looking in all the different possible directions but not at him. Man, I was really nervous and my hands were all chilled and cold. I could feel his eyes on me which made me even more at unease. So I began to look at the television placed at a certain height. Everytime I've been to these coffee shops I've always found some music channel tuned on to the television. But this time some sport channel was on that I didn't have much knowledge of. So, I started concentrating more on it so as to deviate my mind and stop feeling nervous. Suddenly I heard him say to me "Would you like to have something?"  H E L L O!!!!....then what have we come here for? I think for coffee, haven't we? I thought. "in eatables, I mean to say. I'm sorry."  Was my inner voice that loud? Did I not say that to myself??  "Oh, it's ok. No, nothing. Thank You."  He immediately ordered two cappuccinos and looked at me again. He probably understood that I would not initiate so he kicked off the conversation by telling me how he'd been expelled from his school on account of failing in most of his subjects. Now, that made me raise my eyebrows but he didn't seem to have any qualms about it. Seriously, he absolutely didn't. He was pretty normal about it and hadn't decided what he would do next. Basically, he was on his way back to home and his visit to this city was only a part of his itinerary. He told me how he had screwed up his History test by writing all about geography and modern science except for history, which i really found amusing. "Do you know what I did after that?" He asked. I answered "no" with my head movement. "I left a note at the end of my answer sheet saying that this was all i could understand from my teacher's lectures though his lectures were indeed interesting. And the teahcer shouldn't feel bad in failing me coz i was already failing in the other subjects except for English", he continued. I almost fell off my chair laughing after listening to this. He further confessed that he wouldn't dare to laugh in a public place, for instance a movie theatre, like this. When I asked him the reason he answered "Well, i've this loud and stupid laugh that If i ever sat behind myself in a movie, i would probably lean over and ask myself to shut up." Man, this was getting interesting and so was his talks.


Slowly and gradually I started finding him appealing. I mean there was something in him which would not let me take my eyes off. My eyes were fixed on him and I would listen to him with the utmost care. He was humorous, sarcarstic, romantic, confused and definately a rebel. If ever engaged in a fight, he would imagine himself doing all those heavy action stunts but would not have the balls to execute them in his real life. Though he would (very smartly) place the blame on the movies for all his imaginative fantasies. One word, which I noticed, that he often used was "phoney". He would consider every goddam person/thing on this universe 'phoney', if it failed to perform or come along the way he'd wanted. For instance, if he ran into his long lost friend who was too intelligent, he would allege him a phoney (for being superficial or acting extra smart). If he met someone who was extremely dumb, he would call him/her phoney too. At times I found him act quite young for his age but at the same time he would say something which would immediately help me call him a 'matured guy'.
     I don't know, but he was a strange guy. One of his own kind and unique in his own ways. He was a flirt too and was indeed blessed with an art to charm any lady he would come across. I don't say it just because he could convince me for this evening, but on the grounds of the instances which he mentioned to me.


 Time passed, our second round of coffee was over, the sky even turned dark giving me an indication that it was time for me to bid farewell. After the conversation, I felt as if I fell half in love with him just as he would feel after seeing any pretty girl. I don't know when would I meet him next but I would truly treasure the time spent with Holden. Yeah, that's what his name was Holden Claufield. I closed the novel, put it inside my bag, paid off the coffee bill and left for my home.


P.S : I've often heard people say that one truly enjoys the novel only when one starts living with its characters. Or in other words they (the characters) start devouring you so much that you begin to converse with them or may be start identifying with them. This is what I experinced this time. I cannot recall after how long a period but I really did. And as Holden would often say "What really knocks me out is a book that when you're all done reading it, you wish the author was a terrific friend of yours and you could call him whenever you felt like."


I really wish to call Salinger on his brilliant work named as "The Catcher in the Rye" :)

8 comments:

  1. I completely and utterly fell in love with that book, when I first read it.
    And you have done amazing job in describing this one too.

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  2. @Rookie: Hey thanks :) And yeah, the character of Holden is beautifully portrayed.

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  3. Madame. When are you going to post more accounts of the developing romance here?

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  4. Loved the awesome twist at the end of the post! I wish I had read The Catcher in the Rye to connect even more with your post. Keep the good work flowing. :)

    ~ Piyush

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  5. @Pravesh: Even I want to but Holden seems to be busy these days. He's joined another school (5th one) so he cannot take out the time to date me :P

    @Piyush: Hey thanks man. I'm glad that you liked it :)

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  6. That was some post :) for 90% of the post,i was really astonished by the crazy lass.

    Beautiful expression....haven't read the book ,will do it surely soon.

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  7. OMG..u made me think for a moment that "SWATI...actually on a such kinda date"...but gud one pal...

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  8. Dear Swati

    Not knowing who you are or what you look like I find it much easier to comment on your work. I came to know of your work through the URL you left on my page. You have a very good style and there is nothing to detract you from being a wonderful author some day. The second paragraph is really a cut above the rest, something that you too must have felt. For the rest, if I were to be a little critical from mere force of habit, I'd merely say that if you had to place Holden in a coffee shop, you just might do better if you'd choose one with chairs in it and not couches, please.

    Yours sincerely
    Jude

    P.s. - If I have made you somewhat upset by not making it all sugarcoated, it is only because we both are in that particular stage of our literary lives when we are prodding around in every direction, trying to discover a niche that fits, and indicating to each other our shortcomings, the surest way to improve. Should the need to vent your frustration arise, feel free to take them all out on my page, and I promise I won't delete any.

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